Response 2, Week 2

Response to Sydney's "Improv 2, Week 2"

I love how this improvisation captures so well the sound and style of Fireworks, August 25, but is still an individualized imitation (language wasn't overly mimicked, images were exchanged, etc.). I feel that riffing off of this could in turn define a direction, maybe focusing in on a particular event or feeling. I particularly enjoyed the line "A naked oak tree stares, the only witness to the dead world trampled under tattered fingerprints left from the souls of boots, and tire tracks". Much strong language is packed into this one sentence, and I think that working with it will be rewarding.